Revision
1. Make sure the reader knows who is talking in my story and what they are talking about.
2. Connect my paragraphs from one to the other so they make sense.
3. Re-read my Journey a few times.
Editing
1. Work on my fanboys
2. Change my 'things', its', 'this', etc.
3. Edit my sentences to have a better flow when read.
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17 years ago
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